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Good job swat, some more time on wording and grammar will help, and I agree, instead of saying what you have for most of the large stuff like the vest and such, more list what would be affordable to a new player who should concentrate more on buying a quality AEG, ect, over uniform and gear. But if money is not a problem then sure, list some of the better stuff out their like plate carriers. Just a sugestion but maybe do a little more research and say list 3 steps to it, like for vests list basic, tac vests for cheap, larger more pricey vests like LBVs, and then the more expensive Plate Carriers and so on. Stuff like that for new players starting out would give them a better idea on which direction to head in their first year. Also a much simpler layout might help, not as many sentences would get them to read it all instead of post a 2 line question you know?
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